Awake in velvet.
Blackness framed her nails.
Then I fought desire
but
(captured by those eyes)
lost force.
Resistance gone
she drew me down
toward both hungry lips
and sharp
white
teeth.
“Dear Lord, preserve my soul…”
I grasped at words
which fled away.
They drifted
through dead air
like falling snow.
Too late for escape
I noticed sounds
as if small
flapping wings
evaded sight.
Or strange
melodies were
(somehow)
produced
by tiny hands
on glinting stabs
across piano
keyboards.
While feeling
coldness
stretching
wide as night
over
distant trees.
(O life: where is thy warmth?)
Beside me, now
she lay
content.
Yet said
“Past victims haunt our rest.
Old wounds pollute
the psyche with
dread
mortality.”
I trembled:
Sensing
that voice
rise.
From a
void
which had
no
end.
(Above is a revised version of poem written at the age of 21.
As a lonely young man I secretly longed to meet a seductress.
Of course, I didn’t really want her to be undead or soulless.
(Though, many people I met in daily life showed little sign of having a soul, either.)
Anyway, I was always attracted by goth looking females.
So went a bit “full vampire” with this. π§π»ββοΈ)
My post-flu depression has eased, yet left me still unable to write poetry, at present.
Art on the blog is mine: I hope you like it? π
Comments are always VERY welcome! π
Has anyone else spent more time on WordPress than usual, recently?
(I’ve found many interesting new artists, poets, writers, and photographers to follow.)
Thank you
for reading.
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Your poem is divine! I wouldn’t expect this from someone aged of 21 π
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Thank you, Debby! π
(I did the drawing when aged 16, by the way.)
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Amazing!! π
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Beautiful poem.
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Thank you, Suzanne!
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The artwork is wonderful! All those colours…I sincerely hope that once you feel better you can get back to writing more poems π
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Thanks, Laura!
So nice to hear from you!
The drawing dates from when I was 16.
I was quite pleased with that one, at the time
Hope you will visit again. π
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That artwork is electric! Great words … ah, yes Goffs … I wuz one once!
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Thank you, Janice!
(The first goth gig I went to was Bauhaus, in 1979.
Miss those days…π€)
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You’re so lucky!
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Fantastic work Ken! Art work is stunning and poem is awesome!
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Thanks Moises!
Great to hear from you, hope things are going well. π
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That is some neat art.
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Thank you!
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Total genius. Truly beautiful and talented work.
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Thank you for those kind words!
(Did the art when I was 16, with some fibre-tips pens.)
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Ken, you really must display. You have amazing talent. Jackson Pollock comes to mind. Your work is truly captivating.
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Thank you!
Coming from a poor background, and self-taught, the art world always seemed closed to me.
No-one is interested in my work in the city where I live.
E-mails to others, are usuallly ignored.
So, not wanting to die unknown, I started this blog.
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My dear friend, this is always the case. Nobody wanted to know Van Gogh while he was alive.
And even today, artists like Banksy – nobody knows who he is – and he is still very much alive.
One must believe in oneself Ken. Dead or alive, you will be great then Ken. The annoying thing is that most of our art will not make us rich, but what a wonderful lasting legacy to leave behind Ken. Your work may still be around in a thousand years in one form or another. People of the future will look on the internet and admire your work Ken. Physically you will be long gone, but eternally forever inspiring those who come after.
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Though english is not my first language – I have a feeling of a beautiful poetry here. I do not know much about the goths – saw couple of them on the streets looooong ago.
About the content – I am not sure yet could it be that the warmth (that I also mainly miss from the other humans) is still to partually be found in GENERATING it by oneself AND turning deep personal attention to the nature? In concrete to each separate flower (not EACH but the ones that attract you), birds in single, single trees that “talk to you” in particular?… That helps me somewhat.
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P.S.
& TALK to them!
AND to oneself also!
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Thank you for those thoughts, Irena!
(Your English is, of course, much better than my Russian will ever be. π)
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I am very glad if they can make some good difference in your perception
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Interesting work and poems. Thanks for stopping by my blog.
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Thank you, Rita!
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wow! look at all the views and comments Ken……….very well done! π
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Thank you, Wendi!
I was pleased that people seem to like the drawing.
(Hope you saw my e-mail on 24th April?
There’s some news, from my end, I wanted to tell you about.)
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π you are very welcome……..I am so sorry, I must have missed your email. Would be willing to re-send it please? I am anxious to hear your news…I sure hope it is good!
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I’ve never resent a message, so tried everything I could think of. But now its disappeared completely. π
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darn it! i will go back and see if it went somewhere else…………are you ok?
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I’m OK, Wendi, It was good news.
I shall send another e-mail soon.
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yay for good news!!! π
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I just sent the e-mail (updated).
Hope things are OK with you?
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π π thank you.
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Beautiful
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Thank you, very much!
(I hope you will visit again.) π
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I sure will. Keep us posted
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Very cool verse. Like your artwork. The gothic look in women is still nice. Usually get to see only at the annual ComicCon– when I think the really-wanna-look-gothicas show themselves.
Art
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Thank you, Art!
I’m glad you like it.π
(Living in a fairly-large English city, I quite often see attractive goth ladies.π§π»ββοΈ)
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Colourful artwork, I love it! Beautiful poem and at such an age your work is phenomenal. Keep doing what you doing. Be blessedπ
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Thank you very much!
I’m grateful for those kind words.π
(WordPress hid your comment in the spam, so I only just found it.)
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Love the art man, but the poem catches my attention. I love the alignment and I love how you keep the words from running into each other and it just enhances the overall feeling of this wonderful poetry. Glad to have come across your blog. Peace and greetings from Sui generis π
Yours,
Shanyu
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Thank you, Shanyu!
Yes: I try laying the poems out to indicate how they sound in my mind.
(Hoping it might pace the reader’s eye, a little.)
Great to hear from you.π
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You are absolutely welcome. Your technique surely works. Very unique and catchy. Way to go. Peace and greetings from Sui generis ππ
Yours,
Shanyu
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Woahhh! That art is just surreal.
And the poem. Fantastic. It feels like this should be in a movie, it will beautifully depict a scene of a dark Gothic movie with no dialogues and just your poem to express the meaning.
I really loved this. π€
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Thank you for this wonderful comment, Harshada!β¨
It is a great response to the poem.
I am really very, VERY sorry that it took me such a long time to reply. π€
(You left so many lovely comments in quite a short period.
Thought I’d replied to them all: but was mistaken!)
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This is an amazing poem… I love it. Especially the lines: βPast victims haunt our rest. Old wounds pollute the psyche with dread mortality.β Damn, it’s so good!! By the way I empathize with you, as I was in a goth phase between 16-23. But you know, these gothic stuff never go away, they just transform.
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Thank you (and kalispera), Vallia!
So nice to hear from you!
I’m glad you liked it. π
(And, yes: I still feel a haunting from my old goth spirit.π€π»π§π»ββοΈ)
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Kalispera to you too! I wish the best for your work, because you’re talented and you deserve it! Have a nice day Ken! β€
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Iβm glad you kept your work from then. Very nice.
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Thank you, Maureen! π
I hope you’ll visit again.π
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I love your work, I’m indulged in similar works of art and poetry. I started at an early age too. I have published a few in local papers. I am often lost on WordPress. I have had many blogs here. Every few years I start afresh. I’m glad I found yours.
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Thank you, Eeta!π
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